아이비리그 고퀄 영문 이력서 자소서 에세이 SOP 첨삭

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영문 자소서 (자기소개서), 이력서 (Resume), CV, SOP, Personal Statement, 에세이, 논문, 발표 자료(프레젠테이션)까지.

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+ 최우선순위 작업 진행

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※ 전문가 소개

- 13세부터 미국 보딩스쿨 유학

- 미국 Princeton University 최우수 졸업 (GPA 3.74)

- KDI 국제정책대학원 Writing Center 에디터

- KDI 국제정책대학원 최우수 석사 졸업 (GPA 3.97)

- 안보지원사령부 (구 기무사) 사령관 통역 수행

- 해외인사 방한 통번역 서비스 지원

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- 다양한 주제와 산업에 대한 깊은 이해와 지식.

- 200편 이상의 영문 자료 첨삭.

- TOEIC 990

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※첨삭 샘플 (1) : 에세이

[첨삭 전]

Humans have developed and used many different types of fuels. In the book Fuel and Ecocritical History the author Heidi C.M. Scott mentions the brief development of energy sources utilized by humans that were biomass fuels such as wood and sun to fossil fuels including oil and coal. She also claimed that the new form of energy sources not only have substituted the obsolete energy sources, but also changes human society because it “correlates with cultural evolution” (Scott 4). In other words, she argued that the type of energy source has a huge impact on human society.

[첨삭 후]

Throughout history, humanity has created and utilized various forms of fuel. In her book, Fuel and Ecocritical History, Heidi C.M. Scott provides a concise overview of the evolution of energy sources - from biomass fuels such as wood and the sun to fossil fuels like oil and coal. She proposes that these new forms of energy have not only supplanted obsolete energy sources, but they have also significantly transformed human society, leading to what she calls a "cultural evolution" (Scott 4).

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※첨삭 샘플 (2) : 텀 페이퍼

[작업 전]

The best strength of Orem’s Self-care Deficit Nursing Theory is that it focuses on the self-care. In other words, if human has the strong will to perform self-care activities and pursue a better life, you can get assistance from various resources including human, facilities, and policies. In addition, although I had only focused on nurse’s self-care in this paper, these concepts can be applied to other professions, if each factors are identified in their own aspects.

This theory stressed about nurses’ assistance to help patients’ their self-care deficits. However, I thought it doesn’t include the process about how this self-care is perceived. I am worried that it could be interpreted as claiming that burnout is caused because the one doesn’t have enough will and power to overcome the difficulties as nurse. But what I wanted to explain is that nurse just need to concentrate on maintaining self-care and prioritize oneself the most.

[작업 후]

One of the standout merits of Orem's Self-care Deficit Nursing Theory lies in its strong focus on self-care. This theory posits that individuals, through dedication to self-care practices and healthier living, can access an array of resources - be it human support, facilities, or policy structures. Although this paper is primarily centered on self-care within nursing, the principles and doctrines of this theory could be relevant across various professions, provided the unique elements specific to each are acknowledged and incorporated.

However, the theory leans significantly towards the role of nurses in helping patients address their self-care deficits. This inclination potentially reveals a shortfall, namely its limited insight into the personal perceptions and internalization of self-care. This oversight could inadvertently promote the belief that burnout is exclusively a consequence of insufficient resilience or willpower to overcome the hurdles of nursing. Nonetheless, my central argument underscores that nurses should place a high priority on self-care and their personal well-being.

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※첨삭 샘플 (3): 영어 프레젠테이션 발표문

[작업 전]

X is the sole supplier of battery thermal management materials to Y’s E-GMP based EVs. Before I start my speech, I’ll go over some information about the industries that the company is related with. First is the Electric vehicle industry. Electric vehicles have an electric motor instead of an internal combustion engine. The global electric vehicle market was valued at 193.5 billion dollars in 2022 and is projected to reach a value of 693.7 billion dollars by 2030 at a Compound Annual Growth Rate base of 17.3% over the forecast period.

[작업 후]

Hello, everyone. Let me introduce you to a promising company, X, which holds a unique position in the world of electric cars.

To give you some background, let's first talk about two crucial sectors that X operates in. The first one is the Electric Vehicle, or EV, industry. EVs, or electric cars, are becoming increasingly popular. The global market for these cars was worth a massive $193.5 billion in 2022, and it's predicted to skyrocket to $693.7 billion by 2030. That's a huge growth!

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- "The Effect of Corruption on Panama's Maritime Sector"

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